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Sunday, March 9th 2008 9:25 am |
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| Mood: confused |
Alrite I just submitted two quotes where the characters are talking to themselves and then to the one another in the scene. Now how is this said?
Romeo: (Speaking) Goodnight. (Thinking) I can't believe I just did that.
Is that right? I mean is the words "speaking" and "thinking" the best words to use for that quote? It seemed logical to me, so that's what I submitted. Now, at first I was thinking of saying "in mind" but that sounds to odd and realistic. So yeah that's bout it. Oh yeah, I'm close to getting a job at Rona, the hardware store. Sent in my photo ID and sin # Tuesday. So hopefully I'll be starting real soon.
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 Me
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| Posted By On Sunday, March 9th 2008 9:33 am |
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I would say you could drop the (speaking) since it is a quote and it is assumed that the character would be speaking, and I'd change (thinking) also too:
Romeo: Goodnight. (Thinks to himself) I can't believe I just did that.
But, that's just my opinion. |
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 Ryan
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| Posted By On Sunday, March 9th 2008 10:43 am |
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| Yeah, I agree with Chris. It's already implied that the character is speaking, so there's no need for that. Anything else, such as thinking or action of sorts, I would put it ( . . . . ). |
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